by rawkchik
While I have never understood the fascination with Angelina Jolie [ nice body but I find her odd-looking ], I DO have the major hots for Ms. Alba. Been a fan since DARK ANGEL - hell, I even own a copy of HONEY. Nicely written - although a bit slower pacing and perhaps more decriptions would have helped visualization a tad more. Still, nice job!
wow. very niiiice. looking forward to reading more from you sweet.
I love both Jessica and Angelina!