All Comments on 'Her Smile Did Me In'

I have read a few of your others, and they've all been very good, but I think this one is the best. But the very end, with the inscription, was maybe a little hard to believe. With it looking like him, and a loving message, you'd think the wife might be a little suspicious.

We aren't really given much info about his relationship with his wife, other than the fact that he's not wearing a ring. It might have been good to put some little tease on the end about which way things might go. And I sure hope there's more coming. For one thing, he still has to finish fucking Sandy in the missionary position! ;-))). How can he imaginably be so enchanted, yet not go back for more? Unless you feel like you, as writer, just don't want to take it any further. (Damn!!)

I'm going to read all the rest of your stuff.

Good story line with a good plot. I thoroughly enjoyed this tale. Keep up the good work!

Gerry, aka MoogPlayer