All Comments on 'Herb and Me'

by colleenslittletoy

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njlaurennjlaurenover 11 years ago
not bdsm

Just pure cruelty,the main character is not sub,he is an abused doormat,there is nothing consensual about this.

katibkatibover 11 years ago
Good...

writing; theme horrible.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Brilliant!

So weirdly arousing. More, please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Good to see the return of these characters

I think your story "Lee and Me"is one of the classics of this genre. The younger ages work better for me in this scenario, but still very happy to see the return of these characters. Would love to see more, from these same characters or others like them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
SUPERB

Full credit and applause to the author for such an excellent fantasy. That said it seemed to end a little abruptly especially when there was ample scope to continue. Also can anyone advise a link or location for "Lee and Me" as cannot trace and sounds enticing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Hi..you can find "Lee and Me" here:

http://nifty.nisusnet.com/nifty/bisexual/authoritarian/lee-and-me/

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
love this story

Lee and Me s one of my favorites! Not too much out there with an Asian Dom or nerds/geeks in charge. Anyway. Please write more chapters for Herb and Me!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Amazing and well written

Please continue your pieces of art into a complete work...you are a real talent and it is a shame that you are not writing anymore...

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
What a pity

Unfortunately you stop writing one of the most interesting story. What a pity!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

this and Lee and Me are two of my favourite storys. would love more of them or anything like them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I think Herb should have stayed fat.

I think Herb remaining fat would have added to Toad's humiliation and I would have loved it if Toad had become Herb's reluctant sex slave. Still, thank you for writing it.

PS. I consider Lee and Me a classic of its genre.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Lee & Me was a great story. To bad it end where it did. The introduction of black rule at the end would have made for interesting chapters

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

I like this kind of story, good fantasy for a wank but no relation to reality.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
I hope You go on

Go on please!

justincbenedictjustincbenedictalmost 4 years ago
It's great, would have liked some spanking, etc.

But I understand where you're going with it.It's very good,kept me very aroused.

superbeltsuperbeltover 2 years ago

Lee and me and this story are really special and hot. Please continue them.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I am amazed by Lee ana me, as well as Herb and me. Both are classics, and I hope for next chapters in the near future.

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