All Comments on 'Here Cums the Bride'

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rightbankrightbankover 8 years ago
Really?

she can't figure out why her fiancé would be upset?

better he should learn now, rather than after the wedding!

spankfunforspankfunforover 8 years ago
Finally, She Got Her Man

Her Ex-Fiance Just Found She Loves Someone Else; and, She Just Sucked and Fucked Him! Great Story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Rightbank is correct

They'd better hope that her now ex isn't the vindictive type. She really does need to work on her sense of timing. Just saying.

LegallySaneLegallySaneover 3 years ago
That

was a hilarious ending. Great Job!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This disaster for the groom-to-be could have been avoided if she had spoken up sooner. As Rightbank points out, bad things happen to people because of this.

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22-08-23 Sorry for the extremely long hibernation. My heart attack and recovery have hit me harder than expected. To be honest, it will likely be a bit before I continue. I am struggling with meds and coherent thought at the moment. I'll do my best to continue with stories alr...