All Comments on 'Here to Stay Ch. 02'

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tracysatintracysatinover 15 years ago
So erotic

This story just keeps getting better please keep going.

caribcocoacaribcocoaover 15 years ago
beautiful

This has been one of the best stories I have ever read. Please continue to submit more entires. It is enchanting and heart warming. Thank you for your creativity. I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please submit more.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Wonderful!

The more you write the better it gets. Keep the chapters coming!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

Very good! Strike that! Excellent!!!!!

RedHotLadybugRedHotLadybugover 13 years ago
Very beautiful

It takes a good author to paint a world that actually makes me feel the weather... that's the only way I can discribe it... and you do it beatifully. Can't wait to read more

NavauraNavauraover 10 years ago
hmmm

I like this story so far, it's well written and charming and everything in it is imaginable and I love the fact that it's not just sexual innuendos but these characters are genuinely getting to know one another without sexual tension getting in the way. It's like an actual real attraction that based on more than physicality.

kmillerk1kmillerk1almost 9 years ago
Wow, just wow

Wonderful Story, :)

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