All Comments on 'Here to Stay Ch. 07'

I really like the way you write, create warm moments and credible events. Thank you again for this story and the rhytm of posting it. I cant wait for more of it :)

I am loving this story. Your charater development is excellent and the plot line is making my heart melt. Something I found interesting and i'm surprised Gavin didn't pick up on it, unless it was a mistake on your part, is Emmett said he SAW The Importance of Being Ernest on the nightstand by the hospital bed. As soon as I realised Emmett was in another accident I thought to myself is he going to get his sight back? Is it a possibility? I really hope so.

Keep up the great work.

"When I woke up, though, and I saw your script on the counter..." I thought for sure that was what Gavin was going to comment on. We shall wait and see.

Awesome story I have a question is the part where he says when I saw the book you were reading is that just a mess up or did he really see

How beautiful he asked Gavin the color of his eyes!

How did he see the script? Unless he felt it on accident? I think you might have made a strategic error. But again so far the story is just great! Gravin is so sweet! And I think I know how Emmett feels about being afraid to be in a relationship. I have never been in one ever.

How did Emmett see the script if he is blind?

Yep one very vital booboo lol but I love the story and the pace that you have set it at... now onto the next chapter

Chapters are getting shorter and I have only two left to read,, Can't wait to see what happens. :)

I am enjoying your writing very much!

I'm on my second reading and I'm twice intoxicated reading this. Found a favorite line: "Emmett couldn't decide whether he was relieved or disappointed, but decided he was more the former." So well written ...