All Comments on 'Heroine'

Fuck off you pathetic excuse for a human being, maybe you need to be raped to get you to stop writing it!

Harsh much?! If you don't enjoy reading about non-consent stories featuring rape, then don't read them. And if you have a particular beef about how Ashson writes his stories, then don't read them. The key point here is..... if you don't plan on enjoying the story, then Don't Read Them! Remember you always have a choice in what you read. Nobody forced you to read this story.

To Ashson:

*grins* i enjoyed the story and thought it was interesting that "Jane" made the decision about whether the heroine should be raped or not. Makes me believe that "Jane" might really be the dominant in the relationship between her and "Joe" and just enjoys the role play of acting the victim. Anyhow, wonderful entry. Keep writing and ignore the haters. *winks*

Don't read non-con if you do not fancy it. Great story telling, Ashson.

Do you ever stop laughing? Very funny as usual. Loved the line of Jane making mutters that sounded disgruntled.

I really like your storytelling......keep them coming..

I don't think I've laughed so hard at someone getting raped before!

Good premise but in dire need of an editor. Language choice and a myriad of errors made this too hard to read