All Comments on 'Hey Big Brother Ch. 03'
by tinytot24
- 10 Comments
Saxon_Hartalmost 13 years agoI dig this series. The only gripe Ihave is that you allowed the interloper to have her ass first. Matt should have had that privledge.
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoThis guy was not even mentioned before now and all the sudden this war buddy is in their house, upstairs and gawking at them, one minute later he is balls deep in Sarah. TOO much happening too quickly. Totally bad writing. Spend at least a little bit of time leading up to these scenes. I have no problem waiting for quality over quick trash. 1 Star
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoI am not liking the sudden addition of someone else. Should probably of waited a few chapters before this. Also the newbie should not of got her ass
tinytot24almost 13 years agoAuthordont worry no more sneak attacks a friend said i should do that and i should have listened to my instincts but i promise no more sneak attacks no more newbies
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoSarah needs to take charge. She needs to make the boys do things together so they will never tell. It is easier than most girls think
Anonymousover 12 years agoNEVER EVER ADD ANOTHER TO THE MIX LIKE THAT DO ALL READERS A FAVOR AND DELETE THIS CHAPTER AND REWRITE IT WITH OUT THE DIP ASS FRIEND
CounselorJohnover 12 years agoMy personal taste is not bent toward appreciating blackmailed sex. I'm glad you have no plans to do this again. Adn of course Sarah doesn't deserve this.
reader018over 12 years agoWhat,can these two not have friends??? Or talk with friends??? The story is about the brother and sister!!!!!
horny2doitover 4 years agoI have not read the other chapters but this one shows there is so nuch potential here. A very horny sister and a hung brother; so many possibilities !! I hope they take a weekend somewhere alone and try all kinds of things :) Is his sister orally inclined too ?? Please continue and thank you.
