All Comments on 'Hidden Flute'

sad and haunting...

Its good...

*L*

So melancholy. You pack a lot into a little space. Nicely done.

What a mind flip! so sweet and gentle then screaching brakes!

Great read! Thx

That was short, intense, sweet and sad a very well written story

Now that's a twist!

A well-told, riveting, poignant tale! I almost -- almost, but not quite -- feel sorry for the narrator!