All Comments on 'Hide and Seek'

Would have given more stars if the story would have continued. Need more to this one.

Oh shit that was hot

This could've developed into a good story but this author evidently decided to cut it short. What a waste. The story was just enough for most readers to assume the story would develop more. Well, that sure as hell didn't happen. I don't understand writers that writes something that should be developed more but don't seem to understand that. It's a shame the author failed to recognize he had something that should have been a great story but didn't on account of a failure to realize what he had. Again, what a waste.

The old fart

Like I said, "More"

That was deliciously hot! ;). Oh, for the love of a horny sister!!

" the humid flesh of his cock"????? Her "cunny"????? Wow. I'm speechless. How do you do it. Are you from another planet?

three years and no chapter two what a waste of time EITHER DELETE OR FINISH BUT DON'T LEAVE IT LIKE THIS LOSER. half a story is worse than no story at all and this is much less than half. no background and no character development and no end all equal a waste of time. this never should have been posted until you were ready to finish it PROPERLY.

I would like to read more to this story

Tender, more than a story. Wanton sister needs brother she can trust

Please continue with more chapters on these two.

I enjoyed reading this story & I hope you will continue with it.