High School Again? Ugh! Ch. 09

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"Tartarus awaits," the eldest Fate said suddenly.

"It's time for you to go," the middle aged one added.

"The child comes," the youngest added. I could feel the truth of their prediction. I wanted to go find Tara. No, I needed to.

"Good luck," Athena said to me, smiling once more. "Not that you'll need it. You and Tara will be good parents."

"Thanks," I said as I watched her fade. The rest of the gods joined her one by one until only the Fates, Zeus, Hebe and Hera remained. Hebe was holding onto her mother. I was surprised when Zeus moved next to her and helped.

"She wasn't always this way," he said, as if reading my mind. "Maybe without her powers she will return to herself." He didn't sound hopeful.

"Thank you for returning my father to me," Hebe added.

"Gods can't die," I smiled. "Not really." She returned it and then they too disappeared. That left me facing the three Fates.

"You did well," the youngest smiled. "But don't leave this island until your daughter is ready to take on her powers."

"Time moves much faster here than anywhere else. A day here in less than a second in the outside world," the middle aged one added.

"You aren't meant to use the power you hold and if you had to face the challenges of controlling nature at normal speed for any amount of time," the eldest added with a sardonic smile. "Well, let's just say it wouldn't go well."

"I got it," I sighed. "Armageddon, again." The three exchanged a look and laughed. It was eerie because their laughs were so similar.

"Don't worry," the oldest said. "The planet will survive until your daughter is ready."

"And you won't miss much at all," the middle aged one added.

"You'll have plenty of time for senior year of high school," the youngest grinned. "Again."

"Gee thanks," I said, surprising myself with a laugh.

"Gaia chose well," the eldest said with a kind smile before disappearing.

"But then again," the middle aged one added, also smiling. "We knew she would." She disappeared as well.

"Did you?" I asked in surprise. "I thought you three wanted Zeus to father the next generation of gods with Tara?"

"Sometimes, even the Fates must play their part," the youngest laughed and then faded, leaving me alone on the island. Well, not quite alone.

I walked out of the cove and toward the mountain that hadn't been there a moment before. I grinned and started jogging toward it. A moment later I was running. My feet flew across the ground and I reached Grandmother's waterfall far faster than I should have been able to. Tara was standing at the edge of the water, her hand rubbing her clearly pregnant belly. She was watching the waterfall, but must have heard me arrive. She turned toward me. Her eyes grew big briefly and then she smiled.

"It's about time!" she sighed in relief. "Or maybe I should say that you're just in time. My contractions are starting. I hope all that power of Grandmother's you're holding onto makes you a decent midwife."

"I guess we'll see," I laughed, going to her and hugging her close. "Thanks for being my sanity. You and junior here." My soul had traveled here to the shelter Tara offered every time Hera tortured me. I'd forced myself to think of it as a dream, but deep down I knew the truth. I hadn't seen Tara in almost ten months subjectively, but I'd felt her love every day. It was my anchor.

Tara saw my expression and looked at me seriously. I knew what she wanted, but I didn't want to share it with her. She had been the harbor for my soul, but she didn't know what I'd been through, not really.

"It was bad," I said in answer to her unasked question. "Very bad."

"Show me," she demanded. "I've been here forever with no contact with the outside world except for your tormented soul. What happened? More important, what happened to you?" I wanted to hide it from her, but the truth was that she already knew the worst of it. Besides, Tara would never let me get away with it. She loved me too much. I opened myself to her, mind, body and soul.

Ten months was nothing compared to the lifetimes we shared when we first discovered how Grandmother's gifts could let us open up to each other, but it was a tough time for both of us. My time was painful beyond imagination, but Tara had more than her share of fear, for me and for our child. We comforted each other in ways that only we could. In the end we were both wiping tears from our eyes.

"Junior? Seriously?" she asked with her crooked grin. It took me a moment to realize what she was talking about. I hugged her again, laughing through my tears.

"I guess we'd better come up with a better name than that," I said afterward. "Something appropriate considering who she'll be one day. Not Gaia though. That just seems wrong. Something earthy."

"If you suggest Mud or Dirt I will kill you," Tara said offhandedly. I snorted, but didn't laugh this time.

"This would be easier if it were a boy," I teased. "We could call him Clay, or Pete even."

"How about Blossom?" Tara asked. We were holding hands now, standing in the water and looking at the waterfall together.

"Now that's just cruel," I answered.

"Maybe," she admitted with a sigh. It was one of the most surreal moments in my life. You have no idea how it felt to be standing there joking and discussing possible names after everything we'd been through.

"How about Terra?" I asked.

"You really want to give that name on our child?" Tara asked in reply. "I mean, she probably will be a terror, but..."

"Fair point," I laughed, but only briefly.

"How about Maia?" Tara asked suddenly. I smiled because it was the first serious suggestion she'd made.

"I like it," I replied with a warm smile.

"Good," she replied, wincing. "Because little Maia seems to be in a rush to be born."

"Well, she is your daughter," I snorted. That's when Tara, my soul mate, the woman I'd faced down the gods for said a very un-lady like word. I tried to hold in my laughter because she was obviously in pain. I failed, which of course caused quite a few additional descriptors to escape Tara's mouth. In fact, the only way I could stop them was by kissing her. By that time the contraction had stopped so it was far more pleasant than either of us initially planned.

"I love you," she said afterward, resting her head on my shoulder.

"And I you, more than life itself."

We were at peace for the first time in a long time and we stayed like that until her next contraction came. That brought the reality of the moment back in full force. We were about to be first time parents.

"You know, I wasn't kidding about the midwife thing earlier," Tara said.

"Don't worry," I said with a confidence I didn't necessarily feel. "We'll figure it out."

"Would you care for some help?"

I knew that voice. My head snapped up and there she was, Grandmother. I was relieved on so many levels that I couldn't list them all. She had just stepped from beneath the waterfall and was making her way toward us.

"You're not gone!" I blurted out.

"I was," she smiled. "But my progenitor agreed to let me return briefly so that I could show your daughter what she needs to know."

"Briefly?" I asked.

"Subjectively," she answered. "It shouldn't take more than a few hundred years."

"Care to take your power back from me?" I asked. "Frankly, it's unsettling."

"You'll get used to it after a decade or two," she laughed. "Or not."

"Then you're not going to take it?" I frowned.

"I am not as I once was. It's not mine to take," Gaia replied, no longer laughing. "It's your daughter's, when the time is right."

"Um, you mentioned some help?" Tara gasped as she squeezed my hand, hard. Her contractions were clearly getting closer together. I exchanged a look with Grandmother and then focused on Tara, forgetting everything else for a time.

Afterward, I didn't remember much other than doing my best to comfort Tara. Grandmother handled the actual delivery. Maia came out pink and healthy with quite a set of lungs. Her cries echoed across the island, but they didn't last long.

We were in a small open aired house made out of stone. I'm not sure how it appeared, but it did and I carried Tara to it soon after Grandmother arrived. I wasn't sure what the bed was made out of, but it was comfortable and after everything was done I climbed in next to Tara who was feeding our daughter.

"I will see you soon Grandchildren," Gaia smiled. "Relatively, but for now enjoy your time together."

"Thank you," I said with as much meaning as I could put into it. Grandmother nodded and left. Tara didn't notice. She was too focused on watching Maia eating to register what was going on around her for a time. I lay there watching until our daughter fell asleep until Tara looked at me.

"You did it," I smiled warmly.

"We did," she agreed, her eyes filling with tears. I leaned forward and kissed her tenderly.

I had no idea what the Fates had planned for us eventually, but I had the feeling that our time on the island would be peaceful. After that, we'd deal with whatever came, even if it was senior year of high school again.

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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I love this story. I would also love a time travel story without the Gods but this is a great read. Thank you JoeDreamer youre a great story teller.

BobbyBrandtBobbyBrandt6 months ago

I muddled through this entire story so that I could leave the most comprehensive review.

I believe like a lot of other readers, I was originally drawn to this story by the premise of a middle-aged man being transported back to his youth against his will and all the promise that scenario held. The conflicts with the Greek gods was not an attraction at any point in the story. Disappointment comes only from unfulfilled expectations and where the original premise of the story is concerned, I was disappointed.

I don't know if finishing the story before posting any part of it would have aided with the numerous errors in grammar, syntax, and consistency, but it would have definitely helped with the flow. The inconsistencies were the most distracting for me. I won't list them all, but an example is the one in the previous chapter when John locks his car in the high school parking lot in the morning upon his arrival, but ends up taking the bus home later that same day.

The future of John's family and everyone else just fell out of the story, leaving gaping holes (not "wholes") at the end. I have no idea where the author intended to go with the ending of this story, but he missed it by a mile.

lisajameshlisajamesh6 months ago

Excellent stuff. A story worth reading which had more than just sex in it. Wandered in places, but, still a good read

inka2222inka222211 months ago

A very very good ending. Thank you for the fantastic story!

JuanTwoNoJuanTwoNo11 months ago

What a story! It wouldn't surprise me if JoeDreamer's dreams were from a different life as chronicler of the stories the myth makers told. Perhaps as myth maker himself. "Never let the facts get in the way of a good story." Or as the exchange between myself and my closest bro of the times had it, walking out of the theater where we had both been blown away by seeing "Slaughter House Five" on acid, I said "Did I hear someone say his whole thing was hinself going off inside of himself?" And he said "Yeah. You did."

This was one fantastic story, JoeDreamer. One of the best. I'm glad my acid days are long behind me.

MarkT63MarkT6312 months ago

Not a bad ending...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

He has access to Gaia's power... Since he has her's and all of the powers the gods had were gifts from her, that means he has Hebe's powers too.

So likely, while he'll let Maia age I wonder if he'll keep Tara and himself young or wait until it's time to leave to de-age them back to high schoolers.

Will they both cause their respective parents to miss out on Maia's youth? It's not like it's beyond their powers to bring them to the island occasionally.

Will he try to get his sister together with the father of his niece to try to have her still exist even though she be different? If not, he'll likely spend a lot of time missing her.

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Or will they just stay with their daughter until she's ready to become godlike then empower her and leave her to her existence...?

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And if Tara is mom to the next generation of gods, does that mean *more* children of her loins the traditional human way or something else? And will *all* children they have become God's?

Inquiring minds want to know...

servant111servant111about 1 year ago

Lots of work here...lots of plot holes..loose ends and rather bizarre paradigm shifting here. Frankly, the core of the tale was supposed to be about a mature man reliving his high school experience with the memories of his older state. When it was focused on that fairly simple and fascinating framework..the whole thing angst and all worked well and was interesting. Then you got too anal into this fairly boring greek god thing and the protagonists transformation into whatever they became....and WOW did it get insipidly boring,

3 stars

Couple of suggestions there skippy....next time FOCUS your meta narrative tightly. When you indulge in to many rabbit trail diversions... the whole meta narrative gets so convoluted and chaotic that readers cease to be entertained. This one is simply too complex and needlessly so. The whole second chance thing is needlessly complex and really does not add anything to the interest of the whole storyline... I have a couple of masters degrees one of which is in Literature focusing upon Greek and Roman works... Even I loose track of the whole thing about episode 5...and buy episode 8 I frankly don't really care about anything excepting getting to the end of this tortuous mess as quickly as possible... In short...it stops being FUN and becomes almost like agtiprop. That is sad because you are a really good writer.

You problem here is you FORCED two really disparate concepts together POORLY... Running the High School High Jinks as a man in a kid's body...is a good and interesting concept. Trying to marry your own version of the Twlight of the Gods applied to Greek Mythology into that line just does not work well... Better to separate these and keep it simpler.

Anyway...the first 5 or so episodes were stellar....the last 4 are just wrong..

bigurnbigurnabout 1 year ago

Still a lot of loose ends, as far as continuity goes. But, I raised my rating to 4 Stars. At least the last 3-4 chapters meshed. The title has little to do with the overall story and the first 2 chapters could have just been referenced. The story could have easily began with emerging from the coma, and summarized the early chapters in one page or so. However, by the end, I liked it.

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