All Comments on 'High School Love Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Still Love story

its still hot and i love the story

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
great love story

I think that you should continue the story. The next chapters would be their summer together for the 3 of them. The chapters after that would be with Emily and Jack at college together as room mates and lovers.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Jamie needs to fuck Jack,and so does Emily! Don't stop now. Open up Jack, here they come... Both at once?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
me and them

If I had been there it wouldn't be over yet till I had eaten all three of their asses and ate two cocks and a pussy and licked all them clean mmmmm then I want to fuck all three of them and they could fuck Me

ladyannawladyannawover 8 years ago
Excellent

Great story, with a very good build up with lots of detail and possibilities.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Wowowo lovely

Wishing I was Emilie , that’s a really lovely and sexy sensual story ... I love it

robin48robin48over 4 years ago
nice girls

I would be either girl and its a tuff choice for me..Lovely story

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I would love to be Jack

I would love to be Jack and let the girls peg me to orgasm. It would be wonderful feeling what they feel while i fuck them.

Tbonex66Tbonex66over 2 years ago
Editing

Your story was good but you lack serious editing skills as do allot of you. First Emily’s mother’s name is Sharon. Then in the third part her name is Karen some times I wonder if it is done on purpose to see if anyone noticed

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Now that was one hell of a ending..aI got so Hard that I have been stroking my Panty covered Cock then pull them aside so my cock is throbbing and I get a intense rush n let go . damn baby...

SissyBoy1WarszawaSissyBoy1Warszawa4 months ago

@f1dude_lotus a beautiful, wonderful romantic, erotic story written with full knowledge, showing the love of one person for another and it doesn't matter whether he is a girl, a boy or trans, homo... what is important is the true feeling of love and friendship. f1dude_lotus I am incredibly grateful to you for introducing a person like Emily, I fell in love with Emily from the very beginning and I wanted to be like her. It's a pity you interrupt this story and don't finish it... e.g. when Emily and Jack get married, do they create a family together? What happened to Jamie?

ps. Sorry for any errors and linguistic inaccuracies, I don't speak English.

SissyBoy from Warsaw, Poland. 📖❤️👩🏻‍🦳♀️❤️👧🏻⚧🧒🏻.

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04/22/19: moved recently, been busy, and haven't been writing much. Not sure what may come.

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