His Big Tent Pole

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The laughs never stopped until we finally drifted off to sleep tangled in each other on top of the unzipped sleeping bag and completely oblivious to the chilly night air.

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Polly_DollyPolly_Dollyabout 1 year ago

Nice not having to read about “throbbing 8-inch cock” for a change, except in passing!

Nice erotica, although I was given pause over the mouth on cervix passage. Dude must have prehensile lips, haha!

leebj1956leebj1956almost 9 years ago
Good story

Good story & erotic and sexy

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
FINALLY !!!

Congratulations! The story was great and the author is both literate and a good story teller as well. Thank you. This gets an A+ from this teacher.

MsQuoteMsQuoteover 11 years agoAuthor
Any recommendations?

Thanks, Anonymous. So noted.

By the way, do you know of a good "editor" or "proofreader" I should consult before going off to that "workshop"? I'd really hate to embarrass myself any further.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
"... workshop the next day on "Erotic Fiction: How to Turn Smut into Seduction."

Before you go to that Workshop, try getting some advice from a good Editor and the help of a good Proof Reader!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
PRFSR

You are right. Not that it matters a lot, but exasperated doesn't work without identifying what was made worse. You could stretch it to mean her emotional state, but exasperated fits better right away.

God I waste time!

Thanks for the good story Ms.

no_naysayerno_naysayerover 11 years ago
Exacerbated

is correct.

PrfsrPrfsrover 11 years ago
Exasperated

Exasperated is the word I think you meant when you used exacerbated.

Scotsman69Scotsman69over 11 years ago
A delightful whimsy...

... and as a spelling and grammar fanatic - see my stories - I found nothing wrong with your 'grammer'.

But your anatomy, or something, is a bit weak. Either you have an unusual cervix, or he has a remarkable mouth.

And if 'throbbing eight inch cock' is a stupid cliche, just what is 'tight wet pussy'?

But I'll forgive you these two wee glitches in an otherwise lovely human tale.

MsQuoteMsQuoteover 11 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Anon, thanks for your feedback. I'll be sure to pay particular attention to "grammer." :)

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