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- His Kitten Again 05
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Click hereJohn and I finished our ride on the Ferris wheel. We were both a bit quieter as we made our way to the ticket stand. He bought me a giant teddy bear with all the tickets we'd won, and I snuggled into it as we got into his car.
The car ride back home was significantly less pleasant than the ride to the carnival. There was a heavy weight as we both considered what we'd said and heard today. I don't know what John was thinking, but I couldn't stop replaying what he'd said last in my mind.
If you play your cards right, everything is going to be okay.
I sighed, sinking into the car seat. I wanted to believe that Alex and I could be together, but he'd seemed more than happy to send me off with John. He actually encouraged me to date him, and told me that he knew I'd like him. It was beyond frustrating not knowing what he'd been thinking when he'd told me I should go.
Suddenly, an idea popped into my mind. As we drove towards my apartment, it grew and developed, taking the right shape. I turned towards John, and quickly told him of my idea. The grin on his face told me that he approved.
We both talked it over, sitting in his car and finalizing the details. We arrived at my apartment just as we had figured everything out. The wicked smile on my face matched the one on John's.
He hugged me goodnight, maneuvering around the massive stuffed bear that I clutched in my arms, giving me a brotherly kiss on the cheek. "Thanks for a fun night, John. We should do it again sometime."
He smiled back at me. "Yes, we should. You've been more fun than my last year of dating combined. I'll call you, alright?"
I nodded, and gave him one final hug before heading up to my apartment. I snuggled the bear close to me, going over my plans in my head once I'd settled into bed for the night.
One way or another, I was going to find out where I stood with Alex.
Whether he liked it or not.
- COMMENTS
dairetoalmost 11 years agowaiting for the next installment!
Great story, just love the characters and they way the story is developing.
You are doing a brilliant job
FA_JFalmost 11 years agoIt is hard work to write a good chapter, it is an achievement to write five and counting. Maintaining quality across chapters is tough and you are doing it well. I am itching to find out what this plan is. John is a great addition. His story would make a great follow up to this one. See, you already have a series!
shysubmissivegirlalmost 11 years agoAuthorThank you so much for another positive reception! I've been out of town the past two days, and I'm getting ready to perform in a musical that I'm a part of, so no writing has been done for a while. Ch 06 will be up soon, but there might be a significant delay for Ch 07 because next week's tech week. So, I apologize in advance for that! Hopefully once I get time to writing it, it'll be a little bit longer, but no promises :)
I'll try to sneak in writing when I can, and thanks again to all of you guys! Reading your comments are absolutely uplifting, and I adore each and every one. After the day I've had, it's been entirely refreshing.
I hope you guys continue to read, things get a little changed up in Ch 06! So, fingers crossed you guys like it! And I'm excited to hear your thoughts on John. I was hoping you'd be interested by him :)
Alright. That's enough of my rambling for one night :)
~shysubmissivegirl~
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoI love this storyline so much! It isn't too rushed, but the transition of time is flawless. The only concern of mine would be that you need not worry so much about getting a chapter to us within the next 2 days. It is okay to leave a week or two between chapters for you to write more each time. It is almost like a tease with only two pages! But definitely No Pressure!!
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoThis is really good and I hope you keep up the good work. I am enjoying this. Thank you so very much for sharing your talent with us all. Looking forward to more!
