All Comments on 'Hockey Rookie'

At least this story has a sport other than idiot soccer. But the author needs to resist the urge to waste nearly a full like "YYYYYEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!" when the average read understands the emotion with "YES!"

I love the stories with sports and I really enjoy the older woman and young stud. You did a good job Neutrona. There is always room for improvement but it was a good read. Keep it up.