All Comments on 'Hoelun's Husband'

A short vignette, short on story, but with a lot of implications! But your choice of subject matter was quite unique. Even though this wasn't in one of the genres that I usually read, I hope you write more of your tales!

Loved it :0)

tihs is great. well written and an unconventional historical setting which made it feel fresh.

We need to read more of this story. It is a great start. There must be many more adventures to come. The first husband coming to rescue her, the wedding, her adjustment to their life together, their first child, etc.