All Comments on 'Holiday Romances Pt. 01'

by mandywilluk2000

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
A Great Build-Up

I get the feeling this could be the start of another great series from you.

I just love how you write and what you write about ;-]

The only thing that didn't work for me was where you kept the identity of the guy she was sleeping with secret.

The way you referred to the mystery man came over a bit too contrived. But it was an interesting experiment.

Keep up th great work.

R.

skip.69skip.69over 15 years ago
I've missed you, Mandy

My own fault - I have not been reading Literotica for a while owing to other pressures, but I didn't not know what I had been missing until I read your latest story, Mandy.Forgive me. I shall try to read many of them now in retrospect, if I can keep up the pace, as your stories always make me so excited.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

I enjoy your writing very much, but as a Finn it bothers me a bit that Sten and Angetta are SO not Finnish names.

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