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All Comments on 'Holiday with My Best Friend'

by lezjayne14

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
No more ?

Please continue the story !

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
awesome

Write more!!! I like it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Nice short story

Often adventures like this happen when alcohol reduces inhibitions.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Good start

It seems a little rushed and you should always make sure to double read what you type (dark brown eyes, most beautiful green eyes). I look forward to more.

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