All Comments on 'Holly Ch. 04'

I thought this was going to be an asshole-jock-overwhelms-reluctant-dweeb story, but you've done a really good job of turning the Ice Queen into a wanton. Keep going!

The story line is really good. I would be interested in how you break the fact of the video camera to Holly. Keep on going!

The slow progression was worth the wait. His consideration of gentleness was classy. Their multiple sessions was typical of new lovers. Her hairy pussy is a turn on. The lack of condoms, just after her period and birth control pills kept the loving natural. The discussions between mom and Holly were realistic. A nice series. Please write more.