by drlust
A very loving story. The sex far more loving than erotic.
And I don't know why I can accept that. If it had anything to do with two men I would throw up.
I'll bet you could write this story between a man and a woman, too!!
Extraordinarily well written and very believable. Erotic in a very subtle way. Thank you!
The story starts on a low level supplying the background for this sensual story. It's beautiful sensual love story thta is not vulgar or pornographic. It is a celebration of love and sex.
I must have read hundeds if not thousands of stories on Lit. but this has to be by far the best.
Although there was virtually no sex until the end, it arroused me from the first words then just kept building & building. A very loving, romantic story as well as being extremely erotic without the raw crudity.
Its like the old saying: - women can be more erotic and sexy with some clothes left on rather than being completely naked.
Keep up the good work
Seldom is a story so well written that it tugs at my heart. This is a love story with great depth. Please turn it into a novella.
story. The main characters were so loveable, the pacing was perfect, the love scene very lovely. I love it. What a great story.
I would have liked more erotic and sensual details throughout the story that would build up to the sex and yet keeping the mystery of the sensual love story till the end.
A terrific story beautifully written. I love stories that develop the characters and let the sex happen incidental to the love. This one deserves to be on the top list for a long, long time. Thanks for writing it!
...and I think it deserves all of the plaudits left by other readers. I'm sorry to have found it so late but there you are. Thank you.
I have read literotica for several years and this was the best story I have ever read. Thanks a lot, seemed like a lovely progression of love and was wonderful.
Sensitive well constructed and Erotic. this is perhaps the most sensitive storyline on Literotica, this enhances the erotisism even though the Erotic scene is only at the Tail end.
Jolly good. More of the same; perhaps with the same cast.
Ranji from Sri Lanka
This is a story for the times of all love stories. Its one Every site of erotic stories i have ever visited has e few that are just outrageously sensual, sexual, and down outright lovable in every way. I must say that there is no way for any story in any of the other sites can ever compare to this one. It has tragedy and humor and sensuality and most of all two very willing ladies to fall completely in love with each other. for the ages and it is a story that anyone would love. My whole heartfelt congratulations on a very well written story!
This is how love should be... strong, beautiful and amaizing...
As usual, you have led with character and followed with emotion and I couldn't stop reading. This was a beautiful exploration of a whole range of feelings for the character, written objectively (delightfully objectively!) in pure terms of love and acceptance and need. A pleasure to read for its human knowledge. Fantastic!
I really enjoyed your story. I appreciated the backround information and the slow and steady buildup.
I loved this story, the trials and tribulations of relationships to Love and wild sexual encounter. Great writing.
Jack
WOW! Incredibly loving story. As others previously mentioned, great writing.