All Comments on 'Home By Eight'

Great story true too life kids, but the ending left me hanging a bit, I found a two part sequel by Writingdragon called "Of Reunions and Life" that finishes off the story just fine, the three shorts make a great trilogy. Keep up the great work people. A fan in Ohio

This is your second offering I've read, and I liked it just as much as the first. I expected a happy ending with the nerd getting the girl, but didn't expect this ending at all. It's nice to be surprised once in a while, but it was sooooo sad. I wanted to bust that chick one right on the nose.

Looking forward to more offerings.

Deb

The story's decent enough, but under no stretch of the imagination can it be called a romance.

Look at the bright side, he got laid for the price of the tuxedo and corsage. A very good trade, plus he now knows what a bitch she is and he can avoid her in the future.

Very good imagery and detail about what he's thinking and feeling. Of course, I wanted it to work out in some way, but the ending is more believable this way....

and, to answer a previous comment, I think there IS a romantic quality to this story. It's more intense and sexual than some of the "snow white" Romances on this site, but so what!! Very well written, A++++++

Where can I find the sequel to this story? I know there is one because I have read it somewhere during the last 2 years. I would love to read it again and then preserve it for a dear friend of mine who I have just introduced to your great way of telling a story!!

Thank You,

Ken

A lot icier at heart than most of what I've read of yours so far, but still takes me over the edge, both emotionally and physically. You should know that you *do* make me *sweat* -- actual droplets...!

A Very Happy Girl

I defintitely think that you should continue this story line. It was well written, and has so much potential for more.

Very good as well as terrible..A good description of innocence found and then lost again, almost in the same instant.. I guess that the guy would have been rather near a suicide if it would have been for real.. Yoron

Sounds like my teenage years ...................without the sex.

Greetings; I have enjoyed several of your stories.

This one has a sequel by WritingDragon that you should mention somewhere. It's a bitch to find without that info. I only found it by accident and the fact I recall what I read very well.

Keep up the good work!

Ramjet

As said; get together with wd and put a link there to this url. Literotica's search engine is so bad that no one can seach back from writingdragon's mention of this story.

Sir you wrote a great story it’s one of my favourite stories. This guy wrote something that went against the tone spirit and soul of your story. Your story has passion and truth that is the real world. Not everything comes up roses. In the real world there is blood death and rejection. I you along that sequel to stay up you’re allowing for the reversal of your original message.

With every single sentence of the sequel I feel pissed off. It’s like putting a bright red bow on a homeless man. Life’s a bitch and your story is probably the only one that says it with great imagery and feeling. After reading the sequel I felt awful and for the time you put in you must of felt the same.

PLEASE TAKE IT DOWN!!!

http://www.literotica.com/s/of-reunions-and-life-ch-01

A very nice gentleman named writingdragon felt so inspired by my story that he wrote not one but two sequels to it. I was flattered, and I liked the story, so it got my approval. The last commenter tells me it violates the tone of my story, and I must say that although the tones are vastly different (one hopeless, one hopeful), there's no violation at play. Look, if every sequel merely continued the theme and tone of the first story, we'd all be enjoying "Twilight" for the rest of our lives. BUT, if you do need something to wash the taste of non-Lothario from your lips, I heartily prescribe further heaping doses of Lothario.

Very moving! In some respects I wanted him to go to the prom and stick it to all the pricks, but that has been sooooo done. Even with a downer ending, I felt that this was the BETTER ending.

Thankyou

Such pathos, so sad, so thought provoking. Well done.

no romance here maybe First Time story.

Or you'll be giving an unintended 5* rating.

there has to be more to the story so finish it already

unless there is a followup. This sucked

And that is how entitled monsters create future sociopaths. I agree this needs a continuation, otherwise it is just an evil, self-important whore taking advantage of a troubled young man. No message, no learning on either side.

Except for actually having sex, it described high school to a tee. And the story was pretty hot.

5-stars & Favorite.

And he grabbed each soft orb in his hands and said, “Ah, my very breast friends.” Which totally ruined the moment for Cindy, who picked up her pooled dress on the floor. “Get dressed. You’re taking me back home.” Muttering “breast friends my ass.”

This story is in the wrong category. It is not a Romance, it should be in Erotic Coupling.

Cindy is just a cunt.

Like the story, AAAA++++

I’ve read a sequel to this so I was able to give this a 5.

I’m amazed at how much of a bitch high school girls can be. Then I remember some 7 th grade girls & realized just how horrible some of them were.

Bill S.

You know life sucks sometimes. Met a pretty girl junior year HS. We dated, fooled around and were good friends. Then senior year she grew uo I guess, showed up at the prom with some college guy. I showed with an arranged date, oh well. dropped her off right after the prom and never saw her again. Had fun though went bowling, it was fun watching the girls in their prom dresses trying to bowl! Hey I lived in public housing, no money, no car but life goes on. Our MC here is probably more like all the regular guys in school. I found out if you really want to hang with all the pretty girls, join the decorating committee! Good story, on to the sequel......

Very enjoyable and believable. We’ll told