All Comments on 'Home for Christmas'

by Richard Norman

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SexxyMe66SexxyMe66about 1 year ago

Pure TRASH!!!

Only full description of sex was him getting a pole in his hole!! Who risks FLU screwing U??

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
No. Just no.

Crude language, terrible descriptions, abrupt endings to paragraphs, poor punctuation...get an editor, and some writing advice.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
what everybody needs

great story,every young man dreams of. and a dick in the ass to boot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
good story untill,

why did you ruin a great story by that strap on shit?

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