All Comments on 'Home For The Holidays'

It would be great if he really did get his sister pregnant. Maybe in one of the later chapters, perhaps?

OMIGOD, soo good, write more please....

stupid story the parents know there is no room for guests but have the grandparents stay for two weeks any person with a brain would tell the grandparents to stay in a hotel while the kids were home keep your stories sounding realistic

Hot stuff! Thanks for a good read.

just needs a little more sexual buildup.

not bad

Could have been longer like a series

Very erotic story with good buildup. An earlier "Anonymous" said the parents were stupid. Well, Duh! This is a classic gimmick in these incest stories: brother and sister, or sometimes cousin and cousin, "forced" (?) to share a bed as though they were still seven years old. These stories are FANTASY; got it? My folks didn't want to let me sleep in the same bed with another boy, let alone a girl of any sort.

This was a cute story, very hot.

the only way this could get a rave review is for the writer to either pay for it or get relatives to give the raves. this was way to rushed and unrealistic plus you gave no background or character development. good as a FIRST DRAFT but not as a POSTABLE STORY.

what a mouth -- complain but did you even read the story?? No specifics, not helpful comments, just complain -- a.k.a., ignore you.. Well written and enjoyable story