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by WRJames

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inspirixisinspirixisover 14 years ago
Why was there a Cindy?

I don't understand why you put Cindy in this story. It would have been much hotter if this was the first time he'd cheated on Lisa, then you could go more into his psychology, there would be more sexual tension. As it stands it just makes you dislike Tom. Having said that the sex scene was hot.

dalchrondalchronover 14 years ago
I agree...

No Cindy and let it be the first time he cheats on Lisa. It would be more dramatic that way. Sexy as hell though.

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