by lovecraft68
Ten stars from me. What a great story. I admit i cried dammit. Thanks for sharing.
Really good and emotional story. A few tiny errors, but nothing that broke the immersion.
Oh, I was getting so depressed reading through the first couple of pages as he was so down on himself. I nearly “closed the book to return it to its place in the bookshelf to select another one”.
I’m glad I persisted and enjoyed the story and ending.
Once again, thank you for another enjoyable reading experience. Cheers!
So this was just AMAZING! The detail you put into these characters was just fantastic. Such a wide range of feelings and emotions. I've ready many of your stories, and I think this is by far your best. This should so be turned into a movie! I would think Halmark would live this! Thank you so much for this amazing work!!!
What a BEAUTIFUL love story! You think you know where it's headed, but you are never sure until that wonderful ending.
As many stars as there are words in this tremendous story.
Thank you.
LeB
A beautiful romantic story. I hoped as I read along that the end of the story would result in their love. Thanks for putting a very happy ending. As always I really enjoy your writings. You have so many followers for a good reason. You are a great writer.
Once again a really good read, well written, plot was good and the characters were well thought out and described, life isn’t always great to us, but sometimes it’s just the wait that’s the hard part, till the good or better times come around again, or for the first time.
I have been a member on here for more years that i care to remember , and at the start i would not have read the 1st paragraph of this story ,mainly due to its lack of hard core sex action (typical male i guess ) but now days i tend to enjoy the more laid back story the type with a start middle and ending and the parts in between filling in the gaps to allow the reader to picture your story in our minds , and this is one of those stories that just hits the spot , you wrote this as a story , not a stroke marathon , it shows how if you let love run its course it will work out in the end ,but like you said a relationship has to be worked at , from both sides to allow the relationship to grow , if not then it will stall and eventually fall apart , just as mine did many years ago i lost the one lady i truly loved because i had other things to keep me interested that did not include her , who can blame her for finding a new and better life for herself , oh i blamed everyone including her for the breakup , but as years went on i realised the fault was mine and mine alone , so you are write in saying don't sit around doing nothing for too long because if you do you will end up like me living alone and lonely with no one left to talk too , so in closing i just want to say thankyou for the time you give to write for us your readers .
Thanks for sharing your imagination and skill. We all benefit from your generosity.
What a beautiful love story! You got it right! I do not believe I have ever read a more beautiful story on this site, and I have been a reader here for years. You truly have a talent for making your stories not just about the sex. Although, the sex is well written as well.
Absolutely tops-probably the best story I’ve read on the Lit. I’m late in finding your work, but I hope you won an award for this.
Paula and Jamie weren't the only ones with tears in their eyes at the end of this story.
Beautiful ending to a rich, full tale of two people who needed each other for different reasons, but came together for the right reason.
phew smazingly stunning all of it Ive never known anything even a slightest shadow of this even as a fantasy
Im so grateful i could share in this
cant stop myself from reading more
I believe it is your best text!!! at least the ones I've read so far!!! Congratulations!!!!
Really, really enjoyed your story. Nothing to beat love, good sex and more love...
I love a good Love Story, and this was the best!! I also had tears at the end of it, because you touched my heart and emotions so well!!
You are SO right, about "Home Is Where The Heart Is!!". My wife is my best friend, in all ways!! It took us " kissing some toads" and more than a few really bad bumps in the road before we found each other; then, it took us some years to work 'us' out, but we have, and have a LOVE that makes us inseparable!
Paula and Jamie...NICE!! Thank You for that reminder to love our lives ones!!
Five**5**Stars...🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠
Absolutely wonderful! Romantic erotic and fabulously sensual.Well worth 5stars. Thanks.
A very nice story. The long sex scene was not necessary nd actually detracted from the love between them. A final scene with them seeing his aunt would have really nailed it. But, I'll still give you 5 stars. Where love is concerned the heart knows what it wants.
There is no reason to apologise for the romance it made the story even better, like salt on chips.
That was by FAR... the most amazing story I have read on this sight!!! I'm a 61 year old man, and my eyes are watering while I right this review!! 1st class all the way!! This is the 4th one I've read of yours, and they just keep getting better and better!!! You have just earned a life time fan!!!! 10 stars!!!!
Today I finished this story. It also happens to be Valentine's Day, 2024. Coincidence? I don't think so. Lovecraft68, you have written a story that is erotic, yes, and a turnon. But what you have really done is write a love story, one with a happy ending, one that brings the reader (me) to tears. I can't tell you how much I enjoy your writing (I guess I'm telling you that here). Five stars is too few.
It has been sometime since I last visited Literotica and to stumble onto LC's storey was an unexpected surprise. the story had depth and feeling and made me feel for the participants in the story and want what they both wanted. I am looking forward to reading more of LC's stories
I’ve revisited this story a few times, now, and it’s never failed to draw a tear.
What a great story. I loved "That's What Friends Are For", but this is just as good, maybe better. I hope you write more like this.
Excellent story, very heart touching. Can’t wait for chapter 2 to hear about Jamie’s job and more adventures with Paula, really loved the first installment.
Great story. I must have read it ten times now and each time it is as good as the first read.
I can honestly say, lovecraft68, that this is my absolute favorite of your stories that I've read. Just the right amount of different elements to make it an enjoyable read, no matter how many times I read it (at least 7 so far), and one that I will continue to come back to whenever I need a pick me up. Well done sir.
This is the first time I've ever read a porn story that had me crying sentimental tears at the end. It's also possibly the first porn story that exalts the best in human nature in the characters. I'm certainly going to check out the author's other works!
Beautiful love story. The build up was nice and slow; so nice. Five stars are not enough!
AND, there were no annoying typos🙂