All Comments on 'Homecoming Again'

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sherlock40sherlock40over 19 years ago
Wow, if only all spouses could be met this way!

Very erotic. You could see the love that they had for each other in every paragraph.

Thank you for the time and effort that you have put into writing this story.

don87654don87654over 19 years ago
This story could stand some changes...

This story would have been much better if the setting was that both had spouses elsewheres and they had been separated because of work, etc., and they were making up for lost time.

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