All Comments on 'Homecoming Ch. 02'

by Frinkles

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THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOover 12 years ago
Love

the way this is playing out, looking forward to the end of it.

ebonygriotebonygriotalmost 16 years ago
This story just continues in strength.

This story just keeps developing in strength and texture. You've developed a story which brings us to the roots of why 'interracial' stories have their own category. With the tumultuous backdrop of 1940's southern states each characters dialogue and actions have so much more depth. cudos.

theDuskyGirltheDuskyGirlabout 16 years ago
stunning

beautifully written and completely absorbing.

FrinklesFrinklesover 16 years agoAuthor
Cheers from the Author

Thanks again for hanging in there. LaLa Lady and WildWildbest, thanks for the comments. I know it sounds hokey, but you two were the first two authors I read...you both inspired me. WWB I hope I'm getting NC descriptions down properly.

nerd4musicnerd4musicabout 17 years ago
Excellent

Beautiful character development and intriguing dialogue. Can't wait for the next installment.

wildwildbestwildwildbestabout 17 years ago
oh damn

not to rush you but could you please please please HURRY with the next part...you totally rock...Jayha

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Intense

Very well thought out framework! Look forward to your next chapter.

LaLaLadyLaLaLadyabout 17 years ago
Very Nice

I think you're weaving a wonderful tale here and hope you continue.

LaLa

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
A Real Story

Very interesting story. I'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters.

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