by Frinkles
As always great writing but noooooooooo not Justine Send him back to Lula. I hate Justine. I will keep reading but I would be crushed if Daniel didnt end up with Lula, the woman he really loves.
Giving it a 75 cuz I cant belive he slept with the stank hoe. NO...........why why why????? he needs to go back to lu. Great story over all.
I LOVE THIS STORY. PLEASE DONT LET HIM END UP WITH THAT WHORE LEAD HIM BACK TO LULU. FOREVER A FAN!!!!!!!!!!
Hey there guys! Thanks so much for hanging in there and letting me know what you think about the story thus far. As for Daniel and Lula -- take your cues from his "present thoughts" not this past memories. Not everything is as it seems with these two.
Lula deserves better than an idiot that's easily manipulated, and that's not counting, one who will fuck anything with legs.
Daniel and Justine are made for each other and they great sexually.
love the story, just hate wat happens in this chapter
he is really starting to be a prick right about now. He wants Lula, then he does not, so he takes the next best thing right-Loser!!!
I pray that Lula finds someone that will love and cherish her for who she is-while away at college.
The "Daniel Double Standard." I'm a little disappointed. Daniel was irritated, angry even, to think that Lula might be sexually active, but it's okay for him to "need" Justine and "want" Lula, and act out on, well, the "need" anyway. He's taking his "need" from Justine, someone he doesn't really want (unfair to her), and denying his "want" of Lula, the person he really wants (unfair to Lula... and himself). Sadly, it's mostly because of racism and, to some degree, because of his self-imposed limitations as her pseudo-brother.