All Comments on 'Homecumming Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
a little rushed

The story is good but it feels rushed.

brosismombrosismomalmost 10 years ago
please story is so stupid

WTF, he fucks her couldn't tell she was a virgin,what's with the other brother ?

just disappeared, hes licking her out next thing don't get mentioned until she tells him they only did oral & she was a virgin

surely he would of had something to say or at least been around while they were fucking the first time

take her to the base or afghanistan Really

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Hot!

Look forward to part 3!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
I don't think the story's stupid at all, as another reader wrote, it's "hot!"

I'm glad that Dan busted his sister Melissa's cherry. That should always be the job of a big brother (unless he's not around, then it's dad's job). A brother should never leave being his kid sister's first fuck to some pimple-faced kid who doesn't give a shit about her. Dan loves and cherishes his sister, he wants only the best for her. And Melissa knows the best for her is what her big brother Dan's got jumping around in his pants. She knows that Dan's big hard cock is for her, just as he knows that Melissa's cute little cunt is for him. I love that last line, "I thrust my cock home and emptied my balls into my sister." That's exactly where all the warm creamy semen in his hot young balls belongs--right up his sweet little sister's sweet little slit. More and more brothers and sisters are discovering that fact every day of the week. The kids are fucking each other's brains out, and the world's a happier place for it.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Nice awesome story keep it going

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