All Comments on 'Honeymoon from Hell'

Please don't stop now! I really enjoyed your story.

Can't believe you left out the dog. He needed to get off too...

Very good. Please continue. She MUST go back to the island!

Loved the humiliation of her stripping and her anus being probed.The humiliation would have been better if she was a little more of a Mother,saggy tits,stretch marks and a slack pussy.Very good though

Great stuff, I Liked the spoken parts, especially about the size of her tits. Cant't wait for part II.

Outstanding beginning to a series of stories. You could have her detained and become the cell block slut, her appearance is perfect, for this. Her husband can find out and they can share the humilation. You can do alot with this story.

Fantastic setup. Would love to read about her return. Maybe a stopover at the cells would be in order so our lovely heroine can provide some entertainment for the prisoners.

eliza, you are a very talented story teller.But why did you really use your own name? Is it what you want, to be a whore? I can imagine you being kidnaped and forced to become a whore for real..... thats what you want ,isn't it?

Very hot! I'll definitely be playing this scene in my mind tonight while I get myself off. BUT try to use more adjectives. It would be even better with more detailed descriptions. Remember we want details on how everything feels, looks, smells, tastes, and sounds!

Like some of your other readers i would have liked to see adolfo have his way with her, and then have her put into a rat invested cell, and let the rodents have their desserts too.

You and the writers that portray black men as all rapist and dumb ass niggers and writers that write about this kind of shit. You are just a rapist humility freak and your kind need to be killed slowly and with extreme prejudice. You are a filthy sick puke ridden son or daughter of a diseased syphletic whore and grand mother. All of you people who read this shit are equally sick and putrid and also sons of whores ridden with mange and rabies and aids and all your children..Yes your darling wife and little girl is eat up with sickness from the parents...wish I could say what i really think of you but this is a civilized site

And it's good writing, so I don't see what there is to complain about.

The story is pretty good but the dialog and action could have used a bit of a rewrite for smooth telling.

some people can't wait to play the race card and call others what they are Racist

I guess you didn't read the story Eliza said they spoke Spanish which more then likely

means they were NOT black ~ so shut the fuck up

some people have the rape fantasy deal with it

if you have ever been through customs in a foreign country you could not understand

you were right on with this story Eliza I hope you do a a part 2 and how her trip home went

or if she changed her itinerary home or if her husband went home with her to Miami

Moral of the story women should never travel outside the USA alone!!

A hot fantasy.... humiliation and being controlled... write more please...

i loved your story.. well written a good reed.. thank you

i knew she could not stop. it is sad that cheating one time even if it is consensual winds up there ruin.

thank you for your story

l_benton@yahoo.com

What a fucked up story.

Is she gonna take the pill after this?