by oceaneyes22
I know that at one point you mentioned you were going to do longer stories and I am really looking forward to that. In my stories I am aiming for 2-3 pages on literotica.com. To me that is 14-21 pages in word.
I am greatly enjoying your story but the only major complaint I have is that I don't really get into the sub/dom thing. That is a personal opinion and you can take it or leave it as you wish. The rest of the story is great and I am going to keep going.
((If you are really bored please look at my current story and comment if you want. I do have several others I am sort of working on and would enjoy your opinions on them when I can post them.))
Love your story, i love the pace, length is good. forget about the crazy complaints from anonymous readers.
I like the one page a day style only if I really like the story, like this one. It gives me something to look forward to each day and is short enough to read before going to school and soon work.
i dont think u have read the comments posted by other readers!! stop goddamn postin up one damn page!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
it is gettin frustrating