All Comments on 'Hose and a Hard-On Ch. 01'

It isn't a very good story for a straight male, you put a lot of info into his dick and it turned me off, but I guess this is great for bi males/females, just not for me. Please do a female pantie pooping story, those are hot as hell :P

I was wondering why the last guy was even reading this story. Did he get to the very end? If he did not like it, then why did he continue.

As far as I am concerned, I hope that you continue the story. I think it could go so many different ways. Explore the experience of writing and then go for what you really wish to write.

Good luck with this work.

Sounds to good!! Thanks

Yup, Anonymous shouldn't say it's a crappy story then request a shi**y one! Sorry, couldn't resist, Interesting story keep on!

Loved the story so far. Can't wait for the next offering

This is a deeply erotic story that demands to be continued to conclusion- however long it may take!

Very exciting, hope to read Part Two soon!

Nothing but good reading! Want to read your next story.

Your story had me so close I stopped playing with myself. Give me her hose and I'll suck both of the men's cock for her.

Easypeter

Cliffhanger!

Right, so it was a verrrry hot story. Great writing. You have a gift or talent or both. Always keep writing wherever life takes you (preferably on Lit, but wherever -write!)

Gotta read chapter 2!

I love this story and hope to read chapter 2 very soon. I sucked my first cock during a threesome with a couple but I didn't get a chance to wear stockings.