All Comments on 'Hot and Steamy'

Well written. Intense. Hopefully ending with an impregnation!

True to the spirit of this story, I came multiple times while reading this story, and am typing this with my thumb because my fingers are still wet with pussy juices. ;) Fuck the comment trolls (figuratively only, of course) - this story is HOT!

- Sarah Salacious

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Hot story, and the husband seems to be OK with it, but I have problems when either spouse expressed love for the other, then denies them pleasure.....so when he denies him access to her pussy without a condom the whole story went down the tubes for me....why stay married?

Thoroughly hot! Loved it! Please write more! Love the chastity aspect.

Loved it. Please write more.

Yeah, it IS fiction. But SciFi is supposed to be in a different category! Anyone care to guess the number of married men who use a chastity device of their OWN volition? (AGAINST their wife's wishes?)

Oops ... now we'll get supportive comments from all THREE of those guys!

Posted previous comment before reading author's comment about writing Fantasy. Nicely done as THAT. Posting category IS the author's choice!

I love the descriptions of her loose stretched out pussy and how her hubby can barely feel it, and I love the ending! Just wish there was a bit more small penis humiliation for her chastised cuckold. Excellent story!