All Comments on 'Hot Blooded 01'

They may be family, but so far apart they could marry virtually anywhere. You need to work on your vocabulary a bit, as well as grammer. Arduous doesn't mean hard in the sense you meant - more like laborious and difficult, for example. But then I loved your canny tongue - that was new and evocative. Keep going, please!

i love it

You made a perfect job Maitre.

Fledermaus

Its much as good than the german

I like it

a great version of your german storie now in english.

compliment

Freddy

It's always a pleasure to write stories. I'm glad you like my stuff and hope, you'll like my other stories too.

A great success.All your Stories so great.

I Love you.

Kisses

Ava

An Excellent read.

Thank You.

Len

Great written.

More please

How much parts will follow? I love it totaly

That's really hot stuff. I wish, I'd meet a girl that way and have so much fun, like he did.

I will be reading all yourl stroies.

Amazing

I should change my vacation destination!

You have proved it being tricky if you don't know your family. Although I think, even if they knew about their relation, they would have fucked anyway. Pretty hot story.

The translation put a faint flush of you know what colour and made everything even more delicious.