All Comments on 'Hot for 39-year-old MILF Teacher'

"As Kristen got out of the car and walked in front of Sam, she lifted her skirt to give me a brief glimpse from behind. His suspicions were confirmed."

Is it "me" or 'he'?

or "His"?

to have a consistent POV.

you could make a 2nd chapter out of this. a bit short but i liked it.

followups would be nice, maybe 2 chapters - one that centers on Sam+Kristen and one on Brian+Shelley. Maybe Brian is out of town over a weekend and Shelly has to travel to the same town at the same time. This splits them up and gives the "swapped" couples the chance to sleep together for multiple nights in a row.

Liked it.

WOW1,

I had a hard time figuring out things what with your switching from first to third party initially. Who said this of that? Well it was me or Sam?

An ok story but confusing as you couldn't decide if you were writing first person or third person. Also, in at least one place you called the husband Mike instead of Sam.