All Comments on 'Hot for Boss'

Nice start. You should definitely continue.

Can't wait to see where this goes. I love stories that build erotic tension

What is jewellery? With one mouse click, you could have utilized spell check. Both technically and stylistically the story is weak and needs a solid editor.

anonymous: give the author a break! its obvious she put effort into writing this story. i really enjoyed it and I think it's better than a lot of other stories here on lit.