by nawtyone
Cool story, I liked this a lot. The letters and thoughts which built made an unusual and interesting plot with a hot climax. You write well and did make it sound believable. I look forward to reading more from you again.
- Mitch
For your first submission, I think this is excellent. I hope that you will certainly continue this...
It would seem that you have room to add to the story, too.
Sure hope he doesn't get caught but he will
Yes, good writing. Kept my interest to the end. and more.
nawtyone (apt name), if that is true as you say it is, then as well as being a fine writer you are a bad girl!
Did you and he get caught?
Anyway, great job.
I loved your story. I have a thing for teachers and I even wrote a story and posted it on here. I thought this was one of the best ones I've read.
Loved the story... one of the best I've read on here... I wanted to do my teacher so bad in my junior and senior year of highschool... there was some crazy flirting but nothing serious... I wish i could go back in time and write letters and watch his reaction.. hot!
Such a hot story. It took me to the edge, then pushed me over the cliff.