All Comments on 'Hot in the City'

Nice work, SP. The sex was hot and fun. The passion palpable. My only complaint: it moved too quickly. Not a bad thing to be left wanting more. A promising first story from someone I want to hear more from. Gotta find out where his thought will take him next.;)

A very good first story.

The passion was palpable and contagious.

Well done.

Good story and quite enjoyable to read.

Nice job, especially for a first outing.

Well done.

Loved it!! Wonderful first!! I am very proud of you!

Best Regards, Don

Loved it, sweet and fast, tends to sweep the reader along with it, leaving one in anticipation of the next part. Go for it Sweetpeee, waiting for the continuation.

Peter