All Comments on 'Hot Mess'

girl, your piece could have been more descriptive about the lovemaking procedure..... it was more of foreplay in the story.... interesting read anyway

I loved it bc it was a perfect pace and i could see everything, be her. This is my type of sex. :)

Just the right amount of character and detailed physical act to build the eroticism.

Keep reveling in the new situations that you keep on creating!

I liked the story and premise! Would like to see this continue! Thank you!