by JohnGalt8
Usually I avoid hot tubs at hotels...but this might make me change my mind :-)
It was the most erotic experience It was the most erotic experience i had and thank you very much
Sexy - foreign woman in a vulnerable position and craving sex? That just screams hot.
Succinct - Not even two pages and yet you not only created understandable characters and a plausible plot but even some hot sex too.
Supple - I can almost see her olive hewed skin and her lips as she mouths thank you.
Fantastic first work on Literotica!
This is a story that can turn me on and that is all it needs to get a good rating from me!
The name John Galt hmmmmm You must be an Ayn Rand fan. If not you should be. Interesting story btw.