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"It is."
"It's not just all fun and games, you know. You'd have to do as I say."
"I don't mind. I want to do it. If it's anything like tonight, I want to do it."
He pulls the covers down and looks into her eyes as his hand caresses her naked breast.
"You have to be with me full time," he says. "So you'll have to extend your stay. I'll take care of your room. I don't want you paying. They won't miss you at work?"
"I don't care about the money," she says. "And they've been after me to take a vacation. They said it would be therapeutic. I don't think anything could be more therapeutic than this."
He lowers his head and his tongue traces circles around her nipple. Marija closes her eyes and arches her back against his touch. The chills she feels aren't due to the cold.
His hand slips under the sheets and trails down her stomach, detours over her hip and comes to rest against her sex, where she's still wet with the overflow of their passion.
"And you want everything?" he asks.
"Yes. Everything. When can we start?"
He touches her and despite herself, she gasps and feels her thighs tremble.
"Right now," he says.
- COMMENTS
tabithajonesalmost 19 years agoWow! The perfect hotel - how do i make a reservation?! Please can you write more chapters to this story - actually there are so many storylines you could incorporate into this. I hope you plan to write more - you are a sensational writer!
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoI LOOOOVE THIS! YOU ARE AWESOME! wonderful imagery...
shereadsalmost 19 years agoIf this woman was vulnerable before, she'll be Jello when this man leaves her bed. Rather than wait for room service to find manacles in his size, I'd duct-tape his wrists to the headboard.
This one's a keeper.
Ariosoalmost 19 years agoOh my word!
You've written your own praise and embedded it within your story, doc! My favorite line:
"Beauty provokes a type of longing in the soul, a desire for intimacy, to join with it."
...could easily be said about your writing. This was a beautiful, sensual piece that truly did draw me in. Once again, the power of your prose is in capturing the essence of female desire, longing, self-consciousness, mourning, inadequacy, need...
Every detail of the story was well-crafted, blending the tastefully elegant with the downright hot and raunchy. You captured Dumanoir's hesitance and shyness so well when it took the hotel staff several tries to explain the dining rooms to her, yet followed with an equally convincing and subtle emergence of her emotions and curiosity about the hotel and her "mystery man" at the bar.
Thank you for not rushing back to her room straight to the sex, and instead taking the time to indulge in a long walk in the moonlight where she opened up. So much more powerful that way!
Nobody writes sex that actually feels like being there any better than you do. The final "climax" to the story was incredible.
Very nicely done, doc -- this will be a new favorite and lure me back for multiple reads, I can tell.
Cheers,
AriO
