All Comments on 'House Arrest'

All family members in England ,we also shag Americans cucks wives,we do not shag sheep we leave that to the Welsh and Australians.We are also adverse to trannies ,shemales and do not understand[but we have a fair idea ]where the word ,cowpoke came from.In particular we do not like anon comments[gutless].This is a fine story.please write more.

SEXY AS HELL!!! Marissa is a TREAT... WOULD LOVE to see you write more about her... ;)

holy crap, that was hawt!

As the title indicated, your great tale was just what I needed to grab my own 'hand-full' and beat it into an eruptive submission in about one minute flat ! And for an 'ole 74 yr.old, that's pretty darn good ! ! ! Keep those kind of great stories 'cummin' !

An absolutely delicious story that made me envious . Don't stop now.

Wonderful! I loved it!

I enjoyed this story quite a bit. I felt as though there could have been more build-up, as it seemed a bit rushed, but overall, it delivered. On a similar note, the sex seemed to be over a bit too soon. Factor in with the brother's self-proclaimed stamina, it seemed a bit contradictory.<br><br>Alas, it was a relatively minor and personal gripe of mine. Your story's length was adequate, but like I said, could've been a tad longer to allow for more build-up, conflict, and tension. Another thing I wanted to bring to your attention was your formatting and style. The narrative's perspective seems to switch between the brother and sister at a whim at one point in particular, so as far as styling the story is concerned, perhaps a section break (an asterisked line will suffice) would be a wise move. This works especially well if you want to signify a longer period of time elapsing (i.e. "He woke up the next morning and...").<br><br>Despite some of its technical flaws, the story was definitely arousing. The setting and premise worked well enough, but my only advice would be to take your time and let the readers get invested into the story and characters before wrapping it up. It'll make for a more absorbing and arousing read, so take it into consideration.<br><br>Keep up the good work!<br><br>-JM

Great Story! Very hot. Hope you write more about this brother and sister.

HAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWT you know who this is!!!!!!!!!

. . . or is it me?? I think it's me! Very well-written, though I'd echo the suggestion about drawing out the buildup a little more. I like to see a little ambivalence, maybe even guilt, about what they are feeling before they actually do the deed. Look forward to reading more.

nice story..can't wait to read more about these two! keep up the good work

One of the best sibling incest episodes I have found on this site and, believe me, I have read a lot of them. Thanks for sharing your story.

fantastic!

Enjoyed reading it, will have to check out the rest of your submissions now.

Hey great story. Totally hot and believable. Hope theres gonna be a sequal!?

Awesome situation, awesome story. LOVED it.

I REALLY enjoyed your story & I REALLY hope you'll do a sequel.

keep writing......

Tota; Rubbish

Looks like at least for he's both lucky and unlucky, considering she doesn't like to share, he'll spend a lot time with his hand

The only issue I have is her saying "fuck my pussy ". That's a given. You only say "fuck my..." when it's something else.

this Is Amazing. Keep Writing

Quite apart from the fact that you're one of the few mortals now living who know how to use a semi-colon correctly, this is an excellent erotic tale. Thanks!

For the benefit of the 'Vulcan' back in pre-history we Aussies got our enormous sheep flocks by the actions of POMES (Prisoners Of Mother England)

Jokes aside, to our author, that was a novel approach having her under house arrest.

I must admit I seemed to have missed when he discarded his clothes and also where were the guardians (parents?)

That was not as hell , great quick story.

Loved it!