All Comments on 'House of Sex'

It's not great but it's ok

My only complaint is that it was short. The concept has potential for series of stories even. It felt rushed to me, but I enjoyed reading it. Good job.

An excellent read but I want more! Think I'll have to go look up some more of your stories to read.

I got lost a lot, an was left confused.

loved the sci-fi elements fused with total hotness. What a great concept. I can see the tanks so vividly in my mind. Would be a great idea for a movie.

wish I could spend some time in one of those tanks :)

Thank you for such a lovely wet dream :D

nice story

I enjoyed the structure and sci fi elements in this story. At the beginning I was left confused as to which character was whom, and their relationship to each other. As the story progressed I enjoyed the technical detail but was left wanting for more steamy erotic detail. I felt that the sex was too clinical and the characters lacked passion. Overall the story is good, but to deserve 4 or more stars the sex needed to be hotter. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Those tanks sounded very relaxing. Too bad they're not real, huh?

Boy did I get it wrong! I thought for sure it was one of those stories where they come out totally submissive. Especially the women! These was better.