by Ashson
One great thing about your stories is they are happy, about average people and there is no meanness in them.
This was fun reading. Sexy reading, too. Yes, wish I knew, like the homeowner, what it was all about for her...but really enjoyed it.
This story was incomplete. There wasn't a flow to it
Both.
Dour Doris from Dumpster town was an alliteration to show how Sharon's personality had changed.