All Comments on 'How I Became a Kept Male Slut'

Your first story in almost 2 years and you haven't lost your touch--still 5 star!

very fun fantasy. the man-descriptions of the girls' outfits were hysterical. i also liked the connection you drew between the different ways people fuck shit up by embracing inappropriate social norms, from blind consumerism to repressed sexuality. and jason sounds delicious.

Tone and language are fantastic..I completely "hear" Jason, picture him, sense what he's like. Yes - love the clothes descriptions...such a guy thing. Working in the Earth Day theme was completely natural. I want more of Jason!

I hope this is but the opening salvo in a extended series. Just rife with possibilities both carnal & comic .

What an opening chapter!

I can only hope that the backstory the characters got will continue with the sex that is hopefully forthcoming. Great to see your return is still flawless.

the narrator manipulates the situation and he's gonna have a lot of fun.

The tone and situation are communicated perfectly, you can almost feel the tension build as the story progesses.