All Comments on 'How I Became Big Sister's Sex Slave'

by Gimli37

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otti1otti1over 2 years ago

Gut so, weitermachen.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
story

Part one was getting hotter and we went into part two and you crash and burned

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Fantastic

It is soooo good

mBrowmBrowabout 6 years ago
Hot romp

Nicely written, and quite erotic!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

That was so fucking hot is your sister available?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Please make another

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Mmmmmmm

My name is Brian and would like a sister like Karen.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Good story

Good story

one of my favorites incest stories

wishing myself bieng Brian

nsmiladnsmiladover 9 years ago
it was really great

keep doing the good work

You made me hot as hell by considering myself as the slutty Brian.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
great story

loved it one of my favorites,and with 3 older sisters of my own no bloody wonder

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Good job!

One of my favorites and I've read a lot of stories here. Big sister and a touch of bondage make it into one of my fantasies.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Idiots

The previous commenters are fucking idiots. The story is great & the encounter with the two guys from the beginning helps to provide background. Much better than just the bro&sis getting it on from the get-go. Love the story too. Definitely made me cum ^_

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Ruined by having the sister a slut

totaly ruins the story when the sister is fucking 2 guys.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Yes

I agree with the previous comment, you really messed the story up big time. It's bad enough you're writing about incest but you can't even write a good story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
not very good

you made the brother into a real pussy whipped asshole no guy would act like that when she started to party after the parents left he would stay at a friends when he came home early and saw a car in the drive he would either make a lot of noise so she knew he was home or just drive by and visit friends keep it realistic and believable please

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