All Comments on 'Ring, Ring, Ring'

Please Carl...............knock her up !

Carl is a true mommy's boy in the best sense of the term. Further proof is in the way he eats out his mother's cunt with wild abandon, and even in how he loves to simply study it and stare at it, appreciating the matchless beauty of every part. Yes, he'll fuck inferior cunts--Carl is a male, after all. But it's that wonderful hole between his mother's legs, the hole he came out of, that rules his heart and makes him harder than ever before, growling hard. It's his own mother's mommy-hole, her warm wet ever-loving twat, that draws his cock and draws in all the creamy sperm from his hot young balls.

Yet another author who is either some young kid or lacks knowledge of the basic slang for this kind of story. Prime examples; "pre-come", and "coming" both totally wrong, as even an 8 year old knows the that the slang for an orgasm/semen is "cum/cumming" and it should have been 'pre-cum'. Damn I wished these rotten writers wouldn't bother posting and wasting people's time trying to read such junk.

PLEASE STOP IT.

It is spelled rubbish...and may that slam the lid on a stupid comment.

At the very least this author wrote a story...how many have you written???

Thanks Don

I do appreciate some of your stories and I'm not the kind of person who comments on grammar, spelling, etc. I don't care about minor mistakes as long as it's readable. I just prefer stories with build up rather then jumping straight into the contact. Especially in this genre.

Like I said, I do enjoy some of your other stories. Please keep posting, thanks for contributing!