All Comments on 'How to Heal a Broken Heart'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Good story.

Very hot, but a little extra dominance would have rounded it off completely.

alphablackwolfalphablackwolfover 17 years ago
excellent!

loved the story, great job. happy to see a bit more inside that head of yours.

lilsubalexlilsubalexover 17 years ago
Great! I loved it!!

Thanks so much! A peek inside my own head and heart .. you naughty minx!

alex

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Fine work!

The author has a fine style, smooth swift flow with no "extra baggage" -- and a sense of realism that brings the reader into the story.

small_town_girlsmall_town_girlover 10 years ago
what an awesome story!

Super realistic just the way i like them... and very very hot.

Loved the emotions at play, messy and screwed up as they tend to be....

Thank you for sharing!

FindmywayFindmywayover 10 years ago

What a brilliant story - not only is it sexy, hot and intense but the feelings are very real and you love the banter and internal dialogue that takes place. More importantly it's significantly less calories than a gallon of Breyer's double mint chocolate chip ice cream not to mention a hell of a lot more memorable.

Nicely done!

Anonymous
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