by DREMAN
I really liked the story and how it dealt with the unintended consequences of when friends take that final step. Too often these emotions and feelings are left undealt with in other stories. Perhaps my only criticism would be that the feelings, emotions and encounters between the two weren't developed more fully. That could've added more depth to an already interesting story.
Well now, breaking your vows, revealing yourself to be a liar and a cheat... Not the greatest way to escalate your friendship. Actually, you deserved to lose more than a friend.
This is loving wives not Non erotic although it really had very little ertoic appeal. Break vows, destroy the lives of 4 people, be stupid enough to be caught and be stupid enough to be caught again. With two losers from the shallow end of the gene pool, we should be happy they did not reproduce.
Reinforces my belief that believing in God (any God) doesn't make you a better person.