All Comments on 'HR Practices Ch. 01'

Oh this is a goooood one, all the elements that i like. You have captivated me with this story and I can hardly wait for more. Fine job.

I agree, this is an amazing story, and even though it's been 10 years since you've submitted it, I would love to read more. there is so much you could do with this beginning, I hope you decide to continue.